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Edit: April 29th, 2011. I went through and fixed my tenses, switching to present tense. Hopefully I got them all, but if anyone sees any let me know. Hmm... I want to do another edit on this later I think, perhaps add in better description. I'm not too sure about the flow of it, but... well, we do what we can.
I have decided this will be the first in a series of seven. I want to do one for each sin.
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I wrote this based on a prompt of writing about your punishment in Hell. Now, I am not saying this is my punishment, but Lust has always been a fascinating punishment.
According to texts, the punishment for Lust is to be smothered in Fire and Brimstone, but I found that a little tame. Hopefully this is a little better. Please, constructive critiques welcome.
It needs a lot of work still, but I had to write.
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I have decided this will be the first in a series of seven. I want to do one for each sin.
--
I wrote this based on a prompt of writing about your punishment in Hell. Now, I am not saying this is my punishment, but Lust has always been a fascinating punishment.
According to texts, the punishment for Lust is to be smothered in Fire and Brimstone, but I found that a little tame. Hopefully this is a little better. Please, constructive critiques welcome.
It needs a lot of work still, but I had to write.
Copyright ©2009
All rights reserved.
You may not reproduce, distribute, perform, publicly display,
or prepare derivative works based on any of the content including any such works without the express or written consent from *Absit-Invidia
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This is filled to the brim with tons of emotions, I mean oh my goodness this even scared me. I just love how well detailed this is! I could almost feel the constant emotion of anguish and despair, I mean I was literally shocked and frightened by someone else's experience in such a devious and unforgiving realm. I mean this is so good, it just might be a winner, but don't get your hopes up yet the contest and their are still many great entrants I have to look at, but I am defiantly going to consider, Great Job!